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Thomas Rist's avatar

Lovely to read this very precisely observed poem. Lovely bathetic close, too. 🙂

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Elizabeth Barnesco's avatar

It does not feel unfinished to me: “It will do.” It ends on a note of acceptance, and the day begins.

I find the poem sometimes refuses to be tinkered with…much as I might prefer it to become More. If I go back some time later, I can see it more clearly - how do you feel about it now?

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