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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Gorgeous. No wasted words.

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

"wasted words" is the wrong phrase, but it feels like it has all the words it needs and is rich and spare at the same time.

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Tamsin 🍂's avatar

I get you. And thank you.

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Tamsin 🍂's avatar

I’ve been working on shortening my lines at the same time as sometimes lengthening them too. Never like to make my life easy.

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

You're just keeping it interesting ;).

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Tamsin 🍂's avatar

That’s a better way to phrase it than my ‘I’m being contrary’.

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