Poetry Pals - Week 29, part 2 - A Month of Summer Poetry - a poem a day
The rest of week 1 of a summer of poetry.
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Hello my wonderful poetry people,
As you know from my post on Wednesday found here. This week over at
we have started a month of daily prompts (given in weekly chunks) looking #poetryinsummer. I have posted the first 3, and here are the next2. I’ve still 2 to do.So the prompts
Poetry in Summer - Week One (August 4th - 10th)
Summer in three linesLying on the grassUse a lyric from a favourite (summer) songThe dog days of summer
Summer colour
The summer offers some advice…
Cruel summer
So it was really wonderful to take on these joyous prompts. As I stated on Wednesday I have tried to experiment with different forms and styles and to take myself a little bit out of my comfort zone. I think I managed it with Wednesdays poems and today’s are no different.
I’m going to add an alteration for the first poem, originally I didn’t want to do a haiku, as I’ve been trying to tighten up my haiku form and counting syllables is only one aspect of haiku and I wasn’t wanted to be that concise and confined. But I did in the end change it up and haiku it.
3 line summer Rain tinged warming breezes Noon abating morning hay-fever Bountiful blooms crowd gardens. 3 line summer - haiku Rain tinged breezes Hot parched gardens drink deeply Make bountiful blooms.
For the first of the second set of poems I had a good old read of the meaning of dog days, having a lovely trip into the ancient mythology etc. which was all rather fun. Anyhoo I dragged myself off my metaphorical Greek beach and wrote a few words, making sure I changed form again.
The Dog Days of Summer
sultry heatwave days
energy sucking days
piercing light days
wilting flower days
wild-seed dispersing days
evening insect chirping days
skin blooming damp days
shade seeking dead days
listless wanton pleasure days
waiting on waiting days
slow wearisome days
lazy thunderstorm days
sleeping mad dog days
the dog days of summer
the lethargy of heat
the fever of drought
the savage midday sun,
hardship may abound
none care, deep in
the fierce fire of apathy
And for the third and last of this newsletter we had to think of summer colour. On the television as I was contemplating was the news that yet another fire had destroyed acres of moorland, caused by some stupid feckless prat silly person abandoning a portable BBQ. I was fairly sure these had been made illegal but on closer inspection it never made it’s way passed the first reading in the House of Commons.
Summer Colour
Black swathes the moors today
obscuring the purple haze of the
heather, obliterating the white of the common
cotton grass, eradicating the deep blue hue
of the bilberries and crowberries.
Black made from the yellow of fire,
from the orange of flame, from the red
of heat, consuming the moor,
devouring nature, grey ash
smothering the earth,
Black clads the moor today and I grieve
for the land and life lost.
So two more to do before Sunday - eek - and a day at the Rugby tomorrow, best get cracking then eh?
Tell me what you think. I love to hear some feedback.
Till next time, peeps.
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Whoa. "The Dog Days of Summer" is just one big rush of feeling/sensation/delicious words. Since you're okay with feedback, I would consider switching the order of stanzas for "Dog Days," keeping 1 and 2 the same and then making stanza 3 the last stanza (turning 4 to 3). Aren't I good at being confusing? I think ending on an image ("the savage midday sun") makes a strong poem even stronger (not always, but I would say so in this case).
Love the third one...moving and thought-provoking ❤️