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Ralph Barraclough's avatar

Really liked that one, my darling. Not that sure why, but it just seemed more like what, in my entirely untutored and inexpert mind, 'proper poetry' should be. I totally don't get all this high-flutin' stuff with rules to be obeyed on the form and number of syllabubs etc, so a number of verses (albeit with no capital letters or full stops) worked better for me. Love you lots, Ralph. PS - love the black rose pic as well, which really set off the prose.

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

I love

“I sleep with pen in hand drawing spirals

in my slumber”, and then the last full stanza and single last line are so beautiful.

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