A poem from my ancient past, an exercise from my writing, stories, and myths course.
“Swollen heart” and “twisted, leafless tree”—💛💛💛
I am glad you have revisited your poem, it is beautiful. What an incredible first line to work from, I might give it a go myself - thank you for the inspiration, Tamsin.
Thank you. Alas as a teenager I just tended to get annoyed at being told what to write. I’d love to see your work.
I’ll let you know if I get round to it Tamsin!
He sang
Oblivious to the naked feelings
That raged in my swollen heart and
The anger that rampaged in my tired head:
Love this!!
☺️
“And I wished I was that bird
Alone in his
Twisted, leafless tree” - beautiful!
Thank you Thomas
“Swollen heart” and “twisted, leafless tree”—💛💛💛
I am glad you have revisited your poem, it is beautiful. What an incredible first line to work from, I might give it a go myself - thank you for the inspiration, Tamsin.
Thank you. Alas as a teenager I just tended to get annoyed at being told what to write. I’d love to see your work.
I’ll let you know if I get round to it Tamsin!
He sang
Oblivious to the naked feelings
That raged in my swollen heart and
The anger that rampaged in my tired head:
Love this!!
☺️
“And I wished I was that bird
Alone in his
Twisted, leafless tree” - beautiful!
Thank you Thomas