My 2nd most rejected poem
I really like:
"Never expecting them, their extra extension invasive."
"They stilled my heart and stopped me learning to love him."
The "extra extension" gives me the second-hand yucks. I'm very much with the speaker in this poem.
I really liked this one too and the ‘ick-ness’ of his fingers which poisoned any chance of the relationship 🙂 x
Another fabulous poem, I love where you went with it!
Fank you my dear! I quite like it too, editors don’t though. Their loss.
Their loss indeed, I am happy that we get to read it, but sad that editors can’t see it’s brilliance!!
I really like:
"Never expecting them, their extra extension invasive."
"They stilled my heart and stopped me learning to love him."
The "extra extension" gives me the second-hand yucks. I'm very much with the speaker in this poem.
I really liked this one too and the ‘ick-ness’ of his fingers which poisoned any chance of the relationship 🙂 x
Another fabulous poem, I love where you went with it!
Fank you my dear! I quite like it too, editors don’t though. Their loss.
Their loss indeed, I am happy that we get to read it, but sad that editors can’t see it’s brilliance!!