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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Oooh. Those last four lines are especially magnetic.

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Tamsin 🍂's avatar

Ta muchly my dear

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Martin Hughes's avatar

Pretty much the

Only thing in the way of

Excellent poetry is

Manoeuvring that text into prosaic form. :)

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Tamsin 🍂's avatar

Guessing it’s not your thing then.

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Martin Hughes's avatar

Ooh, sorry, it was a playful acrostic (spelling POEM) to suggest all the poetry as not crossing a line. Poetry is art and I'm here for it. I thoroughly enjoy reading yours. It is my thing. 🎉

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Tamsin 🍂's avatar

Ah, sorry I missed that little clue, got caught up on prosaic. Thank you for the kind words.

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